Nice run Charlie! Considering you wont get your official license for another week your doing great!
I will preface what I'm going to say with(for those who think you have to be a driver...a great driver no less, to have an opinion)I'm not a driver! So take it for what its worth!
To much coasting and early breaking...this will get better with experience. After one lap of following someone, put where they were slower in your memory banks and take advantage the next time. You were letting Dennis dictate in places you looked to be faster. Really funny you tightened your helmet and seat belt right before your off in 1

Nice save and Dennis was good to check up in case you came back across the track. Good run Dennis!
We have a setting on our GoPro that will set exposure for either inside or outside the car...funny it was the opposite of yours and a little dark. I will post as soon as I figure out how to edit!